Cobra-- It's as I've said before. You've got the potential, but the effects are too random. Your work has no flow, and the action is all concentrated in one specific area. You need to learn how to spread things out, or all your pieces will look the same.

Who would want to read a comic that has the same punchline every day? I'm not "dissing your style", I'm giving you advice. So yeah, instead of getting all butthurt about it, think outside the box. Your piece would be awesome, if everything weren't on Snake. It looks like he got hit by a confetti grenade.

Cheers, though.

Fantasy got my vote, it just struck me as the most appealing.

My only advice on it would be: NEVER let a C4D obstruct the view of the text.

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