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Old 04-19-2008, 09:56 AM
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Re: [Zorolo] Rain Seraph's Training

Good take. Now then, to move on. ^_^

BiC: The door swung open as a figure, mumbling something akin to, "I wonder why the barrier is down today. Normally nothing gets within twenty meters of this house." The man was looking at the ground, or in this case, at someone's feet, and slowly looked up to meet the eyes of his old friend. "Ah, Rain, you've caught me at a bad time. Give me a few moments and then I shall better address you," the fencer stated as he snuck past the Grim Angel and headed over to the incense lanterns and checked them.

Two of the incense wards had gone out. Well, that meant the incense just needed replacing. The fencer disappeared back into his cabin for a moment before emerging with a few sticks of incense and lighting them, placing them in the long, spike-like things rammed into the ground. After lightning the new incense, all manner of violent life began to withdraw slowly. "Sorry about that, I'm so busy I forget to check these things," he told the vampire, looking at him.

"Let me guess, you were one of Cadenza's students, right?" Zorlo asked with a smile. "Well then, it's time we get to work then, isn't it?" the Aura Master asked as his door appeared at the boarder of the defended area. "Let's go find you a room."

OoC: Since I'm not sure if Altamira gave you a room, let's get that part over with.

Simply put, this lesson is a description of your room. Your character will be told to find his/her room. Each room is different and unique. Take some time and describe the door; the secret to the Dome is its many doors. Each door is unique and elaborate, and gives a clue as to what lays beyond its closed surface. Afterwards, your character will enter their room, which reflects the character in some way. Take your time and describe EVERYTHING. That means furniture, colours, décor, etc...EVERYTHING!! I want you to SHOW me the place, so I can imagine what it looks like. This post is all about description, NOT necessarily action. For help, check out other people’s training threads. Minimum 600 words.
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