Ok dis be my first fanfic please tell me how I started out!

Chapter 1: Dreams

The sweet bliss of the destruction of Ganondorf has brought on an age of peace within the boundaries of Hyrule. The desert Gerudo's have kept to themselves but have made an offer of neutrality, hoping to be left alone. All that the sages could hope for was that Ganondorf would remain sealed within the Chamber of the Void deep within the mountains of Mar' Kesh, located south of Kokiri Forest.

The children of Kokiri forest were playing as peacefully as ever, Milo being his arrogant self but the rest resuming normal activities. Four years have passed, and none of the children have grown up within the forest. The Deku Tree sprout has grown considerably, reaching the height of an orange tree.
A young boy was sitting on a square floating piece of wood with a fishing line in the forest pond, swinging his feat happily. Fourteen year old Link was the only one to have grown up, being a Hylian and not a Kokiri child. He had sharp blue eyes and well styled medium long blonde hair. He still wore the garb of the forest, a green tunic, but he also still carried the ancient Kokiri sword and the Deku shield.
Navi, a fairy partner he had four years ago which aided him in the sealing of Ganondorf, didn't have much time for Link anymore, looking over the growth of the Deku Sprout. He also didn't have any more contact with Princess Zelda, who looked similar to Link but with longer blonde hair and a beutiful face. He saw her constantly in his dreams, but he knew that she probably wouldn't need to see him anymore. He did, after all, go on a trip to a weird country and defeated a rather scary mask, leaving Hyrule behind. But he knew it was probably just because he didn't announce his return.

Link sighed and picked up his fishing line, not having much success at catching anything. He looked throughout the forest village, smiling at how the magical shimmers were still active. He looked up and on a small ledge he saw Saria sitting and playing her Fairy Ocarina, tapping her foot with the beat.
He put down his fishing line next to his tree house and climbed up the ledge.

"Nnnnhhh...Hey, Saria!" Link said happily.
"Hey, Link. Do you want to play with me?" she asked, pointing to her Ocarina.
"Nah, I just came to listen. You've gotten really good with that thing. I haven't really practiced with my Ocarina." said Link smiling and looking at the setting sun.
"Heh heh. That's why you need to play more with me. Every day you grow older, and I want to spend more time with you...Because sooner or later Milo will be forced to...kick you out." she said sadly.
"Aww, don't worry about it, I have a good ten years!" said Link patting her on the shoulder. Saria sighed but nodded grinning.
She put the ocarina to her lips and started playing a slower version of her own song, Saria's Melody. Link smiled and did and bounced his head back and forth on his shoulders with the melody. Soon, the moon crawled up from the horizon and Saria waved good night. Link sighed and hopped from the ledge after her, and went to his own tree house.

Link sighed and stared at his wooden ceiling. In the darkness, he saw Zelda's face. He didn't know if he could face her again. One day, he just picked up his things and told her that he was just going for a long time, when in reality it had only been two years, and the two years he was back home he kept it silent. Hearing her laugh in his head, his eyes grew heavy, and slowly his eyes drooped into a deep sleep.

Thunder split dark clouds that crept over the peaceful field. Link was wandering around, looking for something, but what he was calling out he couldn't even hear himself. Climbing up on a small ledge, he surveyed the land which was now being engulfed by a heavy rain. His elf ears drooped and he called into the night, and at the same moment thunder cracked through the area. Link sighed and turned around. Standing below him, a dark figure with a dark sword was looking right at him. Red glowing eyes stared at him from the ground. Link stood frozen. The figure jumped up and sliced at Link....

"GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!" Link shouted, sitting bolt upright.
"What...phew...the hell was that?!" Link said to himself, wiping the sweat from his brow.
"Liiiiiink!!!!!! Liiiiiink! Someone here for you!" he heard his friend Saria call.
"Who is it?" he asked, blinking.
"I dunno, some guy from Hyrule City!" she shouted.
"WHAT?!" Link shouted, jumping out of his bed and landing on his face.