Very good
Just a few things here; in his
Strengths how fast is 'very fast'? And how strong is he? (give an example of what he's able to lift)
Annnd in the Skills/Magic section, describe the Overtake a little more, like how much stronger does he get, really? What abilities does he gain? (in the Race section, you put that Darks are able to use other elements like fire and lightning )
I think that's it x3 so just fix those up. (Sorry for taking so long to get to this)