This story is really, REALLY short. Too short to even pass for a chapter of a fic.
And... do you even have a character approved?
EDIT: I see. So you DON'T have a character. In that case, let me direct you to these threads.
http://www.zeldauniverse.net/forums/...hitheatre.html
http://www.zeldauniverse.net/forums/...hitheatre.html
Character Policies and Guidelines
Characters - Zelda Universe Forums
If you need guidelines for a character, or ideas on how it is supposed to look, check out Taen in my sig.