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Old 04-16-2008, 10:49 AM
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Re: \i.s.a.a.c.\ ~ [c-AO9x.i]
Firstly, Lysis has an unspeakably odd fixation with Metroid Prime :3

Secondly, this character is fantastic. There's just a couple of things I'd like you to touch up on:

- Omniscient beings are generally extremely strong. Give him a couple more weaknesses.

- Explain further his usage of the two swords, please. How he uses them etc.; most characters have a general 'style', you know.

And that's it! Once again, it's amazing.
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