Nice try, barely even one fourth of a heart! If you don't like it big deal, I'm still writing it and it will be a game eventually. It's really interesting if you actually READ the story rather than just judging on first impressions! My work if for my enjoyment, if you can't afford any helpfull advice then I'm ignoring it. I suggest you write your own rather than critisize others, if you have the gut for it! (and no, I'm not going back to my old mood. I'm just proving him wrong.) The thing is, about 35 percent of you people think it's a good idea. And that's good enough for me. It takes courage to put something like this on the net. Despite what people think.

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Let's see... I'm really bored half the time I'm on the net, just like everyone else. I'm into anime, zelda, sega, and Nintendo games. For movies I like james bond, any star wars movie, and again some anime done by mizaki san.

For reasons I'd rather not talk about, Im not posting my fanfics here anymore. Instead you can find them at
www.fanfiction.com by searching my username avatarmaniac.

If you find anything I like interesting, feel free to drop a line at zfan121@yahoo.com

I'm getting some new hardware for youtube soon too so be sure to check that out as well I'm. zfan122 over there.