well... for your first story it's pretty good. you should keep writing and mabey you could get a scholorship> hey it's possible!!!

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"'And so the lion fell in love with the lamb...,' he murmured.
I looked away, hiding my eyes as I thrilled to the word. 'What a stupid lamb,' I sighed.
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