Before I reviewed which will be after these messages........

woah woah woah calm down zfan121 and Super Fergus. Now Super Fergus is an example of a NON constructive Criticism review: That is a text-book flame which I will feed to Fyrus. (I was going to upload a picture of Fyrus but the upload link is brok0en and someone should report to a Mod since I can't find one) now zfan121 don't go back into your old attitude with that comment before my post just cause he gave you the rap.

(bell rings)

Fanfiction Review Time! I am not good usually at noticing spelling errors but I found one. You spelled older, (OLDER) (capitalization error) no big deal but it is an error nonetheless. I like this story line an original take without "Gary Stu" Link abilities coming out of nowhere without an explanation and worse no one caring for an explanation.

"on his way out he noticed something weird. The triforce symbol on his left hand. (That’s weird...didn’t I wash that tattoo off a week ago when the E’3 was over? Why would it show up just cause I fought like Link?) The symbol"

I like that description of the tattoo instead of him freaking out like this: OMG I got the Triforce of Courage this is sooo freaking COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! (nearly passes out in gym and the crowd doesn't even react even though it's been glowing with a heavenly glow for 15 mins) In your "book" it disappeared quickly like it probably would in real life.

I wonder if someone would really do that in a E3? That would be fun to do a tattoo of the Triforce as long as it isn't a permanent one. (bell rings) More comments later since after a while I lose it at grammar and type like a drunk.