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Originally Posted by Spearhead
It has potential, but you don't help the potential grow at this rate. You need to put more effort into it.
Wanna know the best, most top secret way of learning how to write better that is always guaranteed, proven to help you write perfectly (or almost perfectly)?
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Read a book
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I figured that much I mean you'd probably freak if you saw beast gannon roaming about New York, and I mean the real thing...not some dude in a styrofoam costume.
Yes, i'm putting more work into it..this's one of those stories that take a while to get to the good part. Like star wars, only there's no jedi or lightsabers.
I'm going to go ahead and keep working on it and when I get to the first boss fight I'll post it up. (Yes this will be a game after I go to collage.)
And yes I have read books, LONG ones too. Like the first version of Allice in wonderland.(The one the Disney movie was based on) That thing was a freaking phone book! Kinda religious but there's a really important book I've been putting off, maybe I'll read that too.
