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- Elaborate on his weapons more. For the sword, how does he use it? What do the other weapons look like? Where/how did he find them?
- His strengths and weaknesses need massive fleshing out. If you need some help, go take a look at my third character, Winona Balthier. He needs some serious weaknesses if I'm going to let him excel in combat and magic.
- In his 'Skills/Magic' section, tell me how he uses the elements. You're dealing with some of the loosest terms in the BA, and I need you to put a cap on them so we don't end up with an omnipotent beast.
Lastly, 5'4'' seems a tad short for an elf o.O
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All of that still applies. If you want this character approved you're going to have to start listening to my advice. In other news:
- He is incredibly strong. I need some major weaknesses.