Okay, good character but I'd like to see a little more expansion on the strengths and weaknesses. He has to have more than those. x3
Also:
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Strengths:
- Perfect balance
- Impeccable spatial and time sense
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I have no idea what the spatial and time sense...
senses, so I would like to see an explanation of it. (What does it do? How does it feel/appear to Damien? etc)
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Weapons:
-[url=http://www.apex-cutlery.com/images/Last_samurai_full_apart.jpg>Sword[/url]
- Gun
-Telekinesis (Mild)
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Fix the sword link. x3 And I'd like to know what's the range/strength of the telekinesis. I know you said 'mild' but I'd like to see more specifics, like...what's the range? What's the heaviest thing he can lift? How far can he throw it?
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Vehicle:
- "http://www.users.bigpond.com/adriansbruce/sketch/cr500.jpg"
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The link there doesn't seem to work x3 (404)
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-"http://files1.turbosquid.com/Preview/Content_on_5_8_2002_12_54_13/hovercar.jpg9BE985B2-A9CA-408B-B6B1DF82238FEFD6.jpgLarge.jpg"
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Doesn't appear to work, either. Timing out.