Much better, still needs a little bit of work. I am going to need a time limit on this freeze move, it is far to powerful without one.

Also please sperate the different skills into sepereate paragraphs, and expand the history just a tad. Unless I have forgotten something that is about it.

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(Sig by sistaluff)
Puck and the Tricksters
Power Shot ruined my Sig. And Made me cry.
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