Hello. I, P, am going to be taking over your lessons for the time-being. I am teaching Xitra with Timaeus.

I have noticed you are quite talented, and your posts read well, putting the few grammatical errors aside. You also work quite quickly.

I'd like you to go through that post and proofread it - this should take an hour, if you know what you're looking for. Do some more of those Showing Sentences Safer mentioned earlier, added to that post, and the post I am going to request you make.

Assignment: Timaeus will be sitting on rock at the centre of the cave, his wings spread out behind him. Before he can even make sense of the situation, Timaeus will have appeared behind Xitra's back, knocked him down, and reappeared back on the stone, even more peaceful than he was before. Timaeus will request Xitra to fight him.

1,437 words: exactly.

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