Just one more teeny tiny thing, mate...

~*Approved*~

Although, I've noticed numerous spelling, grammar, and sentence structure errors. I suggest running him through a spell check at some point. Furtermore, I highly Reccomend the Battle School (The Forum Above this one) to develop both your character and your abilities as a writer. Heck, I've benifited alot from the Dome and it's teachers. Just make a comparison between my first character (Arin Bryant) and my latest character. (Kristina Ellis) [Links to both can be found in my Signature] The Teachers there are all nice, and approchable, as well as the mods, BAers, and the members of the Council.

With that, I say... Enjoy your stay. ^_^

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Wonderful avy by sugarpoultry, just as wonderful sig by TAB. ^_^
Battle Arena Characters: Arin Bryant, Aleena Moteiran, Vaskalen, Kazuya Hayashi, Kristina Ellis

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Originally Posted by Honour/Silver Cody is like Michael Jackson on anti-steroids.