Okay a few problems.

Weapons: What does the blade of light look like? Also what are the devistating of his shotgun?

Armor: What does the armor look lik?

Weakness: No good, no good. That is not a proper weakness, I will need at least two more minor weaknesses, and one Major before I will approve him.

Appearance: Just expand a little bit please.

Do that and I will take another look. ^_^

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