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Old 04-07-2008, 02:33 PM
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Re: Alaik

icy Breeze please STOP POSTING IN CHARACTER THREADS! Sorry for yelling, but you have done it before, and have been scholded for it. No more, Mmmmkay?

Onto topic. I am going to need you to expand the following sections:

Weapons: What do they look like? Do they have an special powers? What type of swords are they?

Strength's: Put them in sentence form, and explain them a little better.

Weaknesses: There are no bosses in the BA, so get rid of that weakness and add at the very least two more weaknesses. Explain what you mean by unskilled.

Magic/Skills: Explain how he freezes time. Does it take time to do? Are there any drawbacks? Can he move while time is frozen? if so how long can he freeze it for? How strong are these light beams? Do they take time to charge up? What are the drawbacks?

I will take another look after you fix that up. If you have any questions PM me.
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