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Originally Posted by Glass
Yay, I get Pucky! ^^
I fixed everything in the post, and added explanations and all that good stuff. However, I was wondering if I could keep the eight hundred feet long cannons in? They were supposed to be holy-OMGsh cannons  .
THE CANNONS ARE OVER EIGHT HUNDRED!
And I read the assignment... puts on kindergardener being lectured voice:
"And I learned that I should make longer sentences with nicer flow, as opposed to choppy, short sentences." 
So I should. Stop. Typing. Like this. 
Assignment time? Or go back and fix eight hundred feet time? |
*Chuckles a little bit* The Eight Hundred Feet Thing. Wasn't actually wrong, I was just making sure you realize how huge that is.
THE CANNONS ARE OVER EIGHT HUNDRED!
heh heh heh. Oh yeah Puck has to give you an assigment doesn't he, okay half-assed assigment here we goooooo~
ASSIGMENT TIME
Have the door open right before Ivan gets there with a man standing there to greet him. I would like at least a two paragraph description of this man(get creative), the have the man take Ivan to his room. As the two walk have the man explain to Ivan the rules of the dome, and have him awnser any questions Ivan has. End it right before Ivan opens his bedroom door.