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Originally posted by Tiroth
Er... are those "guard dogs" meant to be minni-Godzillas or something? Sorry if they're not, but that's what they look like... :confused:
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You're close. Those are sprites of the kaiju Angilas, a former enemy of Godzilla then turned his friend. He's a rather popular monster and a favorite amongst most kaiju fans *like me* It's always a joke that he looks like a dog or something, and come doesn't he a bit!
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Originally posted by Flying Dutchman
Ahem.
Bad things:
1 - Jokes (overall) (I'm not a Godzilla fan so there might be jokes I don't understand.)
2 - Speak Bubbles, there fine but not very.. ye know.. good
3 - Background, where the hell are they?
4 - This isn't a sprite comic. A sprite comic is a picture with multiple frames. You only got one.
5 - At "Hey Godzilla" there should be a "," behind it.
6 - The... thingy on the left is just as big as Godzilla, but isn't Godzilla a very big monster?
Good things:
1 - Sprites are good! ^.^
2 - The joke on nr 3 is pretty nice.
I hope that you improve on these things. Thank you for time.
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1. Then because you're not a fan of him it's understandable you don't get them ^_~
2. Yeah, I'm working on them, they were just especially bad for that one, don't know why.
3. They're really just anywhere half the time, working on that too.
4. Oh bah. They're sprites and they're comics/cartoon comics. I mean it literally, gimme a break
5. I write the dialogue exactly as they say it. Usually people don't take that pause.
6. Actually that thing *the robot kaiju Jet Jaguar* is exactly as tall as Godzilla in the movie he was in.
1. Thanks! They're really good I know, got 'em from Toho Kingdom.com.
2. Yeah I figured that one would be good.
Here's my newest one, my best yet easily. Maybe people will actually understand this one...-_-
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Oh shizzle I didn't notice your post Sigve! ^^;;;
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FD.
It's still a comic. It doesn't need multiple panels to be a comic..
Go read "the far side".
Mirren, Very nice comics. The sprites look great, and the jokes are okay(atleast the lats one)
The speech bubbles would look neater if more effort was put behind them...
(Ones similar to AMD would look good)
īThis shows potential, keep up the good work!
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Thanks bud, I really like these ones. The sprites are indeed good, they're form Toho Kingdom.com as I've said, all from the various Godzilla video games. And don't worry I'm working on the jokes to make them less kaijuy ^_~
I'm working on the bubbles, my newest one has nice ones, but I'll use that link for help.
Thanks ^_^