Before I ask for any detailed changes, I want to see the following changes.

Weight: There has to be some unit of measurment. It can be Imperial, or metric, or of you own invention (In that case, you'd need to post the I/M conversion) however, you can't just say the won't answer it.

Height: You're not asking how tall they are. Think of it like a police or military file. They need exact measurnments, not just what the person says they are.

Strengths, Weaknesses, Personality, and Apperance: Please expand on all these qualities a little bit, the latter two more so.

Biography: Please put the biography into proper paragraphs for easier reading. Generally, paragraphs are between three (3) and five (5) sentences long.

Finally, please space out all the sections. It can be quite taxing trying to tell the Skills from the Weaknesses. If you're having trouble, feel free to look at any one of my characters to see how this is done.

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