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Old 03-29-2008, 08:44 AM
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Re: Sonlen Evandar Xiulta

*Does that knuckle-crack thing*

- Weapons. How does he fight with his sword? Where is it sheathed? Why does it do those weird and wonderful things? I need more detail. As for the bow, just tell me where he keeps the arrows etc. Does he have a quiver on his back?

- Expand strengths and weaknesses. If you need some help, look at some of the approved characters, or take a glance at mine (not the first though, because I'm going to kill him because I hate him).

- In his skills/magic, explain what type of wounds he can heal, if magic like this makes him feel tired, what the drawbacks are; also go into futher detail about these 'attack spells'.

- Expand the personality. For this section it is a good idea to ask yourself a few questions in your head, then write down the answers.

Quote:
There were to many adventures he had for me to tell you about.
- This is what we here in the BA call laziness. Even if you can't document them all, tell us a couple that have influenced his life in particular. I also want you to talk about how he came across his weapons and powers.This last one is just a little thought of mine, but a vampiric world-domination plot somehow involving elves is a little far-fetched, even for here.

Oh! Biographies have been known to stretch over 9,000 words. Keep that in mind when you are writing. Also remember that you'll have to write with this character, and you want him to be as developed as possible. The better your character is, the more fun you'll have writing with him.

Attend to those things and I will return :]
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