Good Job, Stupid. Improvement is mondo beyondo!

Pros- Good speech bubbles; when you used them. They look really nice and are easy to read. Your background is really good! That wooded shack background is very professional looking, and I have to say, I want one! Also, your special effects were really good. I liked the explosion quite a bit, both times. The little one in the sky was really good, and I liked the BOOM as well!

Cons- what is wrong with that face in panel 4!? It could have been funny if he were just yelling, but it looked more like he was a schizophrenic psycho, the way his eyes were all wonky. Like he just got hit in the head, you know? And your text without bubbles looks bad. I suggest sticking with bubbles or finding some new way to write the other text, 'cause it lookes really unprofessional, especially when you put it right next to your really good speech bubbles and special effects.

8.2/10 it was really quite good, just fix those little htings and you'll be way good!

P.S. Is that ship from Phalanx, by any chance?

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