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Originally Posted by Asmodeus
I have to say that I agree with Liquid Fire on this. It's certainly well-written out and wordly witty also, you definitely display creativity and a penchant for word play here. If I have to complain, paragraphing every now and again might be useful, perhaps once every four lines or so to break it up (yet still retain the sense of rhyme)
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Well, funnily enough, I did consider that, but then "arguing ad nauseam with folks; each one of them had differing opinions in some way to those of mine" would have been over two verses, but the second half was a continuation of the sentence so that four line split didn't seem to work. I tend to put most of my poetry in a solid block these days, as opposed to verses, mainly for that reason; my style often has those sentences, split across lines, and in odd places. I'm sure there is a term for the literary device where a poet finishes a sentence and starts another in the same line as well, but for the life of me I can't think what that term is. If anyone knows, I'd be grateful if they'd let me know. I use that device a lot too.
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Other than that, I can't think of anything to disagree about it at all! How many of us I:SBer's feel the same way you do about this, I wonder? 
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I don't know. I shall have to ask them!
Thank you for the comments, and thank you too Liquid Fire, and everyone who voted in the poll. It is great to hear that people like my work!