03-16-2008, 12:21 PM
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I HATE JENNIFER LOVE HEWITT
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Re: Wretch and Rapture
Okay, the first thing I'd like you to do is to split the character into appropriate paragraphs. PM me if you need help with this. ^^
I also need you to give them one or two exploitable weaknesses. Like, a weak attribute, or soft spot. Something that can be put to use by your opponent.
Fix that up and I'll take another look. ^^
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Originally Posted by JemaKnight
I reckon for once you should let Tott speak for himself. I'd imagine he'd be quite tired of you constantly talking on his behalf.
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