
03-14-2008, 03:13 PM
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Confusion is my middle name.
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Re: Sprite Comic Contest- Vote Here!
Okay, so.
Junahu..
Sprites are good. Emotions are always cool. Totally loving the moon expression. It's good for a one-timer comic, definitely. You don't need to get to know the characters to get the joke. But.. It wasn't funny nor was it visually impressive. Sorry. The comment was funnier than the comic itself.
Smeezette
Smeez is a GUY?!
Anyway, Smeez brings his trademark overdramatic lame anime style to the scene. The characters give the impression of being deep, but... It doesn't work! Not as a onetimer comic! I want to see more, damnit! Graphically impressive.. The lowest of the four I picked due to the somewhat lame anime style you have and giving your characters 'depth' but not expanding on it and seemingly having no intention to.
Lurre
Spelling mistakes.. Ugh. Other characters having different names and personalities, ugh. Textboxes.. Are okay. Transparency isn't always a good thing, but this is borderline good. The storyline is confusing, but 'the Power Shot' was actually pretty funny. The panels being attached was a bit distracting, somehow. I can't put my finger on it. Visually... Not impressive. Not bad, but not good either. And sometimes the text was a bit hard to read, but not really a big issue.
GoldStud
Visually, very impressive, as usual. Storywise, even if you don't know the rest of the story, it's good to understand. Besides, who doesn't know X and Zero nowadays? The usual hilarity is there as well. Only problem is - WHERE ARE MY FANCY TEXTBOXES?!
Stupidman
Confusing, visually unimpressive, EXPLANATIONS in the comic, same scene and no angle changing.. Yeah.
Mr. Fish
Freekin' hilarious. Angle changing. While there are no visual effects - this comic doesn't need it! So it has zoom-ins, different textboxes and everything to keep it exciting nonetheless! It works as a onetimer comic too, you don't need to know the characters to get the joke. Absolutely no gripes here.
Blizzaga
Building plot, but.. It's a onetimer comic! And where's Mario's trademark "-a" speak? Visually unimpressive, but like Fish's comic it doesn't need it. So it has close ups and bla die bla... Yeah, it's good! Plot building is the one thing that I have a gripe with, seeing how it's supposedly a onetimer comic.
Quartz later.
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