I've been forced into typing with the Wii, so excuse the rushed reply.

- Delve into his magic more. I need this thoroughly explained before I decide if he is too strong.
- Expand weaknesses. It is the general consensus of the Council that a character can't excel at both magic and combat. Moreover, I would like to see some magical drawbacks.
- Expand the bio to include events in the Spider's life.

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