03-07-2008, 06:43 PM
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Deku Scrub
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Location: some town in cali
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Re: my signature is a poem for zelda i made, any comments?
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Originally Posted by HelmarocKing
Wow. That's a really nice poem. Nice job! I like it!
One thing though, it's a bit to long to put in your sig like that. I would suggest making the font smaller, so it doesn't stretch the page. 
But really, I would love to see more of your work. It's a little unpolished, but you have raw talent there. Once again, good job! |
i havent really done much other poetry, i only did zelda cuz it interests me
and yeah, unpolished, its hard to rhyme some of that
i should make a more polished version
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in a land of gold light
thats beyond mortal sight
there lies a great golden power
in three golden shards
the firey passion, of the goddes din
the land, farores world we live in
and last but not least, the laws that shine not gold, but blue
the shining sky of the goddes, nayru
the hero of time on an argeuous quest
saving hyrule from evil, trying his best
to don a new blade, but little did he know
When the blade was unsheathed, seven years did come and go
Align with 6 sages, to loan him their might
to defeat evil in the one final fight
so go now, hero, take sword in hand
banish evil, return peace to the land...
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