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Originally Posted by Euphoria
This is very good, I just have one or two qualms:
- The things like S.P.E.A.R. and G.U.A.R.D., have they been taken from a game or something similar? I don't mean to say you'd do that, the abbreviations are just too excellent.
- Write a little bit more about his personality. Does he have many friends? What is he like around people? Ask yourself a few questions and write down the answers.
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Haha, I didn't think my abbriviations were that good ^^ Thank you
Nope, their not from another source, the things that are are mentioned at the bottem of the post.
Ok, I expanded on Ivan's personality, and added a small note about Charlotte's personality too. Lemme know if I need to add anything else!