
03-06-2008, 09:36 AM
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I HATE JENNIFER LOVE HEWITT
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Re: Nafien De'Voirig
All I need you to do is expand the bio. In two sentences, you for from "Nafien De'Voirig was born in...", to, "When he was forty...". That's a little too big a gap for meaningless memories, don't you think? Friends? Family?
At the end--he uses his skills as a mercenary, but does he have any goals? Any dreams?
Let me know when it's been bolstered a little. ^__^
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