Okay, this is looking pretty decent at the moment. It just needs some overall fleshing out, though.

Armour: Describe his armour - What does it look like? What can it defend against? What can't it defend again? How did he get it?

Strengths: His attributes - Speed, fitness, etc. Explain just how strong he is. He knows martial arts, that's a strength--how good is he with them?

Weaknesses: Explain his vampiric weaknesses - 'Etc' isn't good enough, because people may make unneccesary assumptions. How and why do his body parts fall asleep? When will they wake up? Is it painful?

Skills/Magic: Okay, simply stating 'necromancer' without giving people any idea of what he can do, what magic he can control. This probably means different to you than others, so you need to either a,) write out a list of his known spells/incantations--describing what they do and how he uses them--or b,) give us an idea of what magic he can control and to what extent.

Personality: This needs to be described heavily, too. A personality is what a person needs if they are to interact with your character--a mergence of words doesn't really fufill this. ;] How does he react to others? To everyday life itself? To danger? What aspects of his personality take charge in all these situations? Et cetera, et cetera, et cetera.

Biography: This just needs to be fleshed out in general - Does he still live at home? (If so, how is he going to actively battle? o_O) If not, when and why did he leave? What does he hope to accomplish in life? I'm sure you can think of more questions. ;]

Fix that up, and you're good to go. ^___^

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