You do not want to make the essay sound as if you're reading for the pleasures of others. You want to sound informative and to the point. I was told this by my Global 10 teacher. I believe this is a thematic essay. You should have an introduction (separate paragraph), 4-5 sentences. For this particular essay, you should have 2 body paragraphs since you're discussing manorialism and communism. And, of course a conclusion. I think I had this kind of question on last year's exam. I just don't remember what I said. Also, my global teacher said to set up the intro. as if it's like a story, not the rest of the essay. Put dates into the intro., places, and info. and you'll have a good essay in no time.

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