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The way they appear against the background is very... abrupt. The lighting is all very nicely done but perhaps it isn't quite so fitting for the mood as a whole. The white light behind them is like they are holy, pure. With an emotion such as desperation and want, you'd be better off using strong earthy colors instead of such a sterile white.

I also can't help but think the girls foremost foot looks like a paw, because of the way it is rounded with the middle toes being longer than the toes at the ends @_@

As to what others have said about the multiple threads - it's true. Sure you might not get a lot of posts but you build up on them and keep posting. The rules state you can post again if after a day no one has posted in your thread. Otherwise, you edit or upload the images into the one post.

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Joker Kyralie Calista
Artwork - No requests =(