Originally Posted by Samus Aran

I shall first comment on said art.
Its an interesting concept which you discribe visually very well i.e. she does look like she is 'wanting' him whereas he is 'so-so' emotionally interested. But there are some flaws with the body structure on both. On the guy (Zachariah) his eyes are too far apart. Here I drew a very quick idea of what I mean. The face (from the front) is spilt up very loosely about 5 chunks from ear to ear horizonally (when concerning the eyes). First chunk is the space between an eye and the side of the face, next is one of the eyes, 3rd chunk is the nose (or space between the eyes (in which case in your picture is too wide)), next chunk is the other eye, and finally the last chunk is the final space between the last eye and the side of the face.



That is the guy done (the most obvious of things), now onto the girl. She is well endowed, breasts wise, would mean she has larger than normal hips (which girls with large breasts do). But that would also mean that she would need good muscles to support these larger assets. In your picture she just looks like she is going to break (especially the legs). So fatten out her thighs and calves.

And my final query. Why don't you have just one thread for your stuff. You have three serperate thread all of which are dedicated to a specific picture you have posted. I don't think that is acceptable.