"I am Paranoia." Fabulous end to a poem.

'Mental Images' is without a doubt my favourite poem here. It is brilliant, pure emotion. I like how you've capitalized every word, as if every single one is of importance. That poem seems to be have been hewn from raw emotion, and speaks very strongly. Your last two aren't quite as good. Repitition might have seemed a good idea at the time, but to me it is quite distracting from the meaning of the poem.

Your shorter ones are just words. I can't decipher a meaning from them. They are, however, beautiful words :]

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