Originally Posted by Kilmiz

I zoomed it to read it... what's the point?

Originally Posted by Lurrrre!

I'm sorry this is dumb theres no point which is the biggest problem and no speech bubbles and whats the plot?
those sprites are hidouse, just work on the plot and bubbles of speech and it should turn out okay1.9/10

Originally Posted by Flying Dutchman

People read comics left to right.

1 2
3 4
5 6

Your order is:

1 4
2 5
3 6

Which is confusing.

Also, where are the Wolfen's? They're getting attacked by Star Wolf but from off the panel? That's sort of lame. That and it's sort of really frantic. Try and 'mark' the Arwings (like changing the blue to a different color (Fox being yellow, Peppy being red, Slippy being green and Falco being blue according to Star Fox 64)) so that we know who is who.

Originally Posted by GoldStud

Hah! I've got to give your credit for realism- your StarFox dialogue was a cheesey as the real game. It matched perfectly. HAH!

Well, the fighting really didn't make sense. You couldn't tell if they were moving or who was where (even though you said Slippy to ma left). I recommend close-ups and speech bubbles instead of the little radio deal.

But, your roster! At the top! Way awesome! The Link background and the Bowser background are really great, where'd you get those? And, kudos for using the Kirby Superstar kirby. That one's the cooliest!

Anyway follow what the others said as well, about the reading left to right problem. But I like your roster of great coolness!