I have been thinking about bringing another story of mine over to ZU. Would anyone be interested in reading it?

Its about a small island that once was full of life. In recent years the town has slowly been dying and is just wasting away. This was the result of an attack from a powerful demonlord who is trying to conquer the kingdom.

A young boy named Galwin Vorloru, who lost his father in attack is fed up with how Valinor has been mistreated by the King. Ever since the attack it appears no aid has come. He and his three friends are now on a journey to see the King, even if it means taking on an army.

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This story kinda came from the same place as Astari Guard. In the MMORPG I played, Valinor was the tutorial island. The NPCs often commented on how times have been bad and that a small town south of Valinor City was destroyed.

So for now Valinor is the name until I find a suitable replacement.

Unless you guys think its ok. I really hate the idea of ripping the name from Lord of the Rings.

Anyways would anyone be interested in reading the story?

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[original looks better, but the site wont allow its awsomeness, so i had to shrink it a bit]