Hah! I've got to give your credit for realism- your StarFox dialogue was a cheesey as the real game. It matched perfectly. HAH!

Well, the fighting really didn't make sense. You couldn't tell if they were moving or who was where (even though you said Slippy to ma left). I recommend close-ups and speech bubbles instead of the little radio deal.

But, your roster! At the top! Way awesome! The Link background and the Bowser background are really great, where'd you get those? And, kudos for using the Kirby Superstar kirby. That one's the cooliest!

Anyway follow what the others said as well, about the reading left to right problem. But I like your roster of great coolness!

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