Good post. YOu stopped using quotes in her thoughts about halfway through your post, but keep in mind you don't need quotes unless your character is talking. Aside from that, you used it's, which is the contraction of "it is". If you're applying ownership to something with it, the its you use is its. But that's it.
Now then, I have some required readings for you, and I'll tell you what post to read up to at the end in parenthesis, along with a new assignments. Do the readings, then your assignment, okay. They're some good threads I think are worth reading. These first few will just be my threads, but I'll grab other good threads later.
Between Darkness and Light (To post ten)
Unexpected Encounters (to post ten)
Now that you've got your readings:
Assignment Time:
Those readings are meant to give you a good grip of your teacher, Zorlo, so reading them will help. For your next assignment, the Aura Master, Zorlo, has taken note in Wisp and shall invite her to his room in the Dome. Now, Zorlo, who is a busy man, will send Armond, his albino helper monkey, to drop the letter off to Wisp by, and I'm not joking, throwing said letter up. After that, have Wisp go in search of the Aura Master's room. End your post with her finding a green door. End your post there.
Rules: 700 word minimum. Aside from that, I want you to limit the use of Wisp's name and the word she. Aside from that, you're good. Soon, we'll start the second part of your thread.