Good for a beginning character, but I have a couple of Quarrels with him. Firstly, I must say with nine magical swords he seems like a walking arsenal. Although, that in itself isn't the problem. What is, however, is that you should go into detail about each weapon's attacks, and weaknesses for each of them for the opponent to possibly exploit.

Secondly, Void is far too strong. By the sounds of it, one hit using it would basically win the battle, no matter the strength of the opponent. Tone it down a shade, please.

Other then some grammer and spelling issues, he looks acceptable, but not until you fix what I mentioned. ^_^

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