There's a slight hint of repetition here, but I suppose that's because we're dealing with the hot lesbo twins of destiny. Work on your diction so you don't repeat yourself quite so much. Other then that, description was rather good, though I felt a little bit more attention could have been spent on the characters and not just their actions.

Assignment Time!

The magical Dome has emerged to you both. Now the twins must delve into its corridors and pathways. Along the way, though, a happy little ghost called the Domerii appears to you, bidding you welcome to the Dome. However, it not only is here to help you, but to extend greetings to you from a sensei within the Dome known as the Dark Eye. Accept his offer, and it will lead you to the library. Decline, and it will offer to put you up for the night, and take you to your room.

Whichever you choose, it will lead you to whichever room you desire. End your post upon arrival. 500 word minimum.

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