
02-17-2008, 09:59 AM
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NOD FLENDERS WENT ON MY ACCOUNT AND CHANGED MY CR
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Location: I BLESS THE RAINS DOWN IN AFRICA
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Re: //kartaikian~stormcloud//[v2]
Okay, a nicely written character, but you need to tone down his strengths.
The abilities to split souls, drain energy, manipulate many different forms of magic, unleash them in one ubar-finishing-epic attack... Yeah, it's too much. I need those toned down a bit. I understand he's gonna be powerful, but there's a line. : /
I'll also need an exploitable weakness. Try to update the weaknesses along with the strengths; it's extremely hard to excel in one area and maintain in another--mirror this in Kartaikian's profile.
Still, an extremely well written character--I'll have no trouble approving him once you fix that up a little. ^__^
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