View Single Post
  #2 (permalink)   [ ]
Old 02-17-2008, 09:59 AM
ManOnFire Tibet ManOnFire is offline
NOD FLENDERS WENT ON MY ACCOUNT AND CHANGED MY CR
Send a message via AIM to ManOnFire Send a message via MSN to ManOnFire Send a message via Skype™ to ManOnFire
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: I BLESS THE RAINS DOWN IN AFRICA
View Posts: 7,406
Re: //kartaikian~stormcloud//[v2]

Okay, a nicely written character, but you need to tone down his strengths.

The abilities to split souls, drain energy, manipulate many different forms of magic, unleash them in one ubar-finishing-epic attack... Yeah, it's too much. I need those toned down a bit. I understand he's gonna be powerful, but there's a line. : /

I'll also need an exploitable weakness. Try to update the weaknesses along with the strengths; it's extremely hard to excel in one area and maintain in another--mirror this in Kartaikian's profile.

Still, an extremely well written character--I'll have no trouble approving him once you fix that up a little. ^__^
__________________
<&luckz> I am conservative. I conserve racial purity by impregnating mattsy with my loveseed.
i will devour you.
<+BobbyEmerald> my pubes are like a mini afro.
Last Edited by ManOnFire; 02-17-2008 at 10:29 AM. Reason: Reply With Quote
Advertisement