
02-16-2008, 01:58 PM
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I HATE JENNIFER LOVE HEWITT
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Re: [Safer] Rethir Longslash's Training
Okay, in real life--one wouldn't speak every sentence in the same tone, would they? To the contrary, they'd change their tone mid-sentence frequently, to enphasise their emotions. So in your next assignment, I'd like you to add some after-text to nearly all individual pieces of dialogue.
I have no queries with you post, save the length--so your next assignment will have a 400 word minimum. I won't mind if you fall a couple of words short, but try to exceed that count.
Assignment time: Rethir enters the room alone, whilst Heishuro has a Domerii wait for Longslash outside, whilst Heishuro has business to attend to. Upon entering the room, Rethir notices his vivid shadow tailing him on all four walls--despite it being a plain room with a dim light. With warning, all four shadows leap from the walls and attack! They aren't particularly strong, but they can withstand a lot of damage before diminishing back to darkness. Have Rethir defeat them all, then exit the room.
I'd like to fit a bit of dialogue to the beginning of this post, and then describe the following battle vividly. ^__^ Have fun.
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