For now, we'll let it go. I just hope to see you remember that lesson for future assignments. ;P Also, I've decided to teach you with my character Cadenza Madrigal, since you seem ready to focus more on stylistic areas of writing.

Here's your next assignment:

Here we're going to focus on perception--and one of UZ's weaknesses. Have UZ go through the hole he found at the end of the maze and proceed down a dimly-lit, narrow tunnel covered in lichen and moss. Describe his thoughts and what he sees as he travels through this passageway. Upon reaching the end, he'll discover that he's at a dead end with no doorways or other means of exit--and he'll have to retrace his steps to find some other way out that's been obscured by the lichen. As soon as he moves again to turn back, however, the two walls of the tunnel will sprout needles that will grow closer and closer to him with each passing second. Have UZ eventually swallow his fear well enough that he can find a way out--or, have him pass out, and wake up in a nurse's station. Either way, have an elf greet him when he escapes/wakes up. No word minimum, but remember what I told you before. ;]

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