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Old 02-14-2008, 07:15 PM
GoldStud GoldStud is offline
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Join Date: Jul 2006
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Re: "Link And Friends!"

Hey... these are... actually funny...
I will say that this is the only comic on here (at least for a few months) that actually made me laugh. 'What kind of mushroom hero are you' 'It couldn't hurt... me' 'you're a hero because you save mushrooms from turtles' were all pretty funny lines. Your art style is good, solely because A- you used a video game font that totally fits the theme, B- you chose sprites that really fit well together, and C- you zoomed out now and then. My only advice is to find something else to illustrate motion besides those straight lines... maybe curved lines, and not black but dark blue to match the sky. I have to say that you're doing quite well. Try too keep each one funny, if you've got two slightly funny comics try to make one really funny one instead.

Peace out, yo!
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