All righty. Fixed up the small typo and the punctuation errors. (Man, you can tell it had been 5 months since I had written something, huh?) I also replaced the word "it" with "they" in the bad sentence there. Hopefull that should make it more clear I was refering to the noises.

Anyway, did you want me to actually rewrite those first three paragraphs? Or will me saying "I have learned my lesson and will not do it again, teacher" suffice?

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lol wut.
UZ Clora Kellas
Listen to my crappy music plz