Alright, I think I've covered everything. Doing heavy descriptive passages is still new to me, but hopefully it will become second nature soon enough. I've noticed that I'm a bit comma-happy as well...I'll have to try to avoid that.

One last thing : how come you didn't think I'd look at the reading?

EDIT : Oh yeah, arcane. Wiktionary definition. Is often used to refer to magic or spellcraft-related stuff, though that isn't listed there.

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