It's not bad, but it seems a little rushed. There wasn't really much explanation about why Sheikana was attacked by the evil wizard or any of that. It could use some more details explaining the story.
I'll be interested to read more though, and find out how the Sheikah interact with the other races and become nearly extinct

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Voted as Best Zelda Theorist in the Summer '08 Awards. Thank you to all who voted, and to all who inspired me along the way!