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Originally Posted by Erimgard
Well, it's okay, but it's pretty short. Not really enough time for any jokes to be presented.
Also, you should PM a mod and have this moved here:
Fan Fiction - Zelda Universe Forums
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First of all, he's right. This should be in the fan fiction boards. This is really short and not really that funny, but I guess that's because it's really short and you don't put up enough jokes to make it funny. Try to make the chapters longer and maybe then this will get a good grade from me.