I've noticed that the names are too modern. Danny, Brad, and Chris are all names that you'd find in this modern day. What're the chances that a guy will be named Altnear in today's day? And I want to see more discription in this comic.
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Danny walked to the training grounds, realizing that, once again, he’d have to use a simple deku stick to fight off imaginary monsters. Day after day this went on, but Danny was content if it meant that he was one day closer to getting his real sword.
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What did the training grounds look like? How long has he waited for a real sword? What inspired him to get a sword?