About the suddenlys, that was not intentional, so I'll watch out for that
. The technicallys were supposed to be sarcasm from Chris' thoughts, but that really didn't turn out as I had planned, so I'll watch that, too.
Glad you guys like it! The beginning is at the end of OoT, but Link dies while in Time Travel, so TP and OoT worlds collide, making there both an Ordon Village and a Kokiri Forest in Hyrule.
It'll make more sense as I go along, hopefully! A new chapter will be up very soon.
...Yay! I have fans!!!